A few things to point out, but first congratulations on your submission. Hopefully, we can help you through the process to get this ship approved for use in the setting.
- The first thing that stands out to me is the lack of wikification, or linked keywords in the upper sections of the article. Things like the NDC, etc can be linked in which helps ground the article with other established articles on the Wiki.
- The next part of the article that I feel needs improvement is the History and Background section, I understand because you are fairly new to the setting this section might be a little difficult for you to fill in. I suggest you consult with the Faction Manager @Jack Pine or someone like @Charaa who submits a lot of the articles for the NDC. Surely there is some interesting history that went into the background of this ship and other technologies and breakthroughs for the NDC that have led to the need for a Colony ship.
- Since this is a colony ship it would be nice to see some fleshing out of the Habitat Areas and other zones of the ship. This ship seems fairly generic, not that it is a bad thing just it needs some definition to the actual areas that the ship's specialization is geared towards. I'd also be interested to know how it delivers colonists to their destination? Does it carry modules that become the first stages of the colony, or is it just a people mover? I feel that such a specialized ship maybe needs some more fleshing out for it to be useful to the setting and other players. (This recommendation extends to both internal compartments and systems)
- There are some minor grammatical and spelling errors scattered throughout the article. I suggest using a program like Grammarly to assist you.
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] 5. Links to other wiki articles are present as appropriate and are not broken
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] 6. The article fits into the Star Army universe's space opera theme and technology levels
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] 7. Images in the article are hosted on Star Army's wiki and sourced responsibly (contact Wes privately if there's a concern)
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] 8. The article is original and doesn't contain copy-pasted content from other articles.
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] 9. The article complies with Star Army's rules in terms of damage ratings, speed limits, etc.
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] 10. The Faction Manager(s), if applicable, have posted approval for this article in this thread.
When these fixes are made, please post a reply here so I can re-check the article. Thank you!