So there's a few things I feel that I should note before I FM stamp this; it's using military equipment on it so the list of manufacturers should probably include either the NDC itself, the Department of Engineering, or
Conclave Ship Works, which is the nationalized shipbuilding company that the NDC established some years ago.
Secondly, it ought to be about tier 10 based on size, not tier 12. Most of the weapons should be fine, but I noticed that it included the use of two SHIVA cannons, which are too large to fit on this ship, and not really suited to its role. I suggest those be removed, as the NDC wouldn't give these away to be mounted on a personal starship.
Lastly, when it comes to speed, the FTL speed should be 12 ly/h (or 0.2 ly/m) as specified on the Falcon Tunnel Drive page rather than the 75 copied from the EYE III class page. The STL speed looks fine for NDC ships.
I am curious, who in particular actually built the ship? The history section says that the design was sent to the Department of Engineering, but the manufacturing section lists the Mining Guilld, who as far as I can tell just provided a bit of tech.